You should have made the opening yell louder. And looped it Decent format, kinda Rageish, like the blend. Backup vocals don't quite rub me right for some reason, my head keeps thinking 311 and I know thats not what I should be thinking regarding vocals right now.
I think you are walking a dangerous line by not taking this track more one way or another. Its not your typical sound, and hard to know how much of it is inspired by something else and how much of it is your own
Keep at it... I think you'll develop your craft and hybrid the hell outa of some hits one day. This is a good start... But it may miss the mark demographically. Certainly worthy of consideration regardless, but may need polishing just to not enrage the critics.
Whats up with everyone trying to sign? You metal? Or radio rock? Not bad but man, the singing...if you're gonna have it - own it - dont make it generic!
Comments for Beneath The Lie
Decent format, kinda Rageish, like the blend. Backup vocals don't quite rub me right for some reason, my head keeps thinking 311 and I know thats not what I should be thinking regarding vocals right now.
I think you are walking a dangerous line by not taking this track more one way or another. Its not your typical sound, and hard to know how much of it is inspired by something else and how much of it is your own
Keep at it... I think you'll develop your craft and hybrid the hell outa of some hits one day. This is a good start... But it may miss the mark demographically. Certainly worthy of consideration regardless, but may need polishing just to not enrage the critics.