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Uploaded: December 7, 2009
Duration: 4m 28s

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Portrait of Protilius Productions
I liked the whole lyrical concepts here, but at times I felt like you embellished a bit, otherwise this is a pretty solid track with good production value

My advice would be to write lyrically in a direction that your listener can "follow the bouncing ball" as easily as possible. Don't make us work as hard to find that anchor of "relating." Find a hook to work in that really grabs me by the balls and makes me cough blood

Great breakdowns, yelling, and angst. Loving all that. Can't wait to hear what you do next


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