Shavis, a scholar-athlete and honey bun addict, soon faces a healthy intervention from concerned friends. Based on the A & E Network television series "Intervention."
by snowflake10 on December 20, 2007 at 7:19 PM EDT
Editing was ok, you need to leave your chyron screens up longer. Not enough time to read them. I thought the idea was good, but the output was a little crude towards the main character. You treated an overweight person with a negative intervention. Try to be more positive while getting a strong point across.
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