Good lyrics. Good use of repeating the song title throughout in the lyrics negating the need for a chorus. Nice bridge tying things together so we know why you're asking the question in the title of the song. The performance was ok , the vocals were ok. The recording quality wouldn't encourage me to release it as a final product but It would certainly make a great demo to an artist who might consider recording your song.
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Good lyrics. Good use of repeating the song title throughout in the lyrics negating the need for a chorus. Nice bridge tying things together so we know why you're asking the question in the title of the song. The performance was ok , the vocals were ok. The recording quality wouldn't encourage me to release it as a final product but It would certainly make a great demo to an artist who might consider recording your song.